could be alot better
hm ya well... you see its 2 plain. you need more instruments atleast if your going try to remix something by nobuo xD. you see the original has a low tine in the beggining to set a tone, also if your gunna try make it a metal version my ears better be raped by volume on 1 xD. i thought it was... to plain you had no extra feature instead of remixing which is to make something better.. you kinda downgraded it. never the less, if you add more instruments add the main electric guitar only as you main melody and a more eleborate more on the chrous; you might have something more acceptable.
6/10 4/5